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Started by Legend, Dec 05, 2022, 04:35 AM

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Me: "Continue this song:
There once was an apple named Nincompoop.
He was walking near a river when he went comploop.
There once was a shark named Apple Juice.
He ate apples any way they came.
He was swimming along, singing this song, when the apple came his way."

AI: "Chorus:
Apple Juice, Apple Juice,
Swimming through the ocean blue,
Eating apples every day,
His favorite fruit, it's true.

Verse 1:
Nincompoop was lost and scared,
Tumbling down the river, not sure where.
But Apple Juice was there to save,
With his sharp teeth and quick reflexes, he was brave.

Chorus:
Apple Juice, Apple Juice,
Swimming through the ocean blue,
Eating apples every day,
His favorite fruit, it's true.

Verse 2:
Nincompoop was grateful, and vowed to repay,
The kindness of Apple Juice, in his own way.
So he sang a song, with a cheerful tune,
Thanking Apple Juice for his rescue.

Chorus:
Apple Juice, Apple Juice,
Swimming through the ocean blue,
Eating apples every day,
His favorite fruit, it's true.

Bridge:
And so the two became the best of friends,
Exploring the ocean and making amends,
For any troubles that had come their way,
Together they would face each day.

Chorus:
Apple Juice, Apple Juice,
Swimming through the ocean blue,
Eating apples every day,
His favorite fruit, it's true."

Or AI round 4: "Verse 1:
Apple Juice the shark was swimming in the sea,
Singing his song so happily.
He loved to eat apples, juicy and sweet,
In the ocean, they were his favorite treat.

Chorus:
Apple Juice, Apple Juice,
He ate apples any way they came.
Red and green and yellow, too,
Apple Juice the shark was a fruit-loving dude.

Verse 2:
But little did he know, as he swam along,
There was a Nincompoop apple on the riverbank,
It fell into the water with a splash and a plop,
And was swept downstream, right into Apple Juice's chop.

Chorus:
Apple Juice, Apple Juice,
He ate apples any way they came.
Red and green and yellow, too,
Apple Juice the shark was a fruit-loving dude.

Bridge:
The apple tried to swim away, but it was no use,
Apple Juice was too fast and too clever for the fruit.
He gobbled it up with a smile on his face,
And went back to singing his song in this beautiful place.

Chorus:
Apple Juice, Apple Juice,
He ate apples any way they came.
Red and green and yellow, too,
Apple Juice the shark was a fruit-loving dude."

Every song has a very similar structure and just doesn't feel creative. The fourth round I tried was the only one that at least slightly understood the setup.

If I remove the song part of my question it is better.

Me: "Continue this:
There once was an apple named Nincompoop.
He was walking near a river when he went comploop.
There once was a shark named Apple Juice.
He ate apples any way they came.
He was swimming along, singing this song, when the apple came his way."

AI: "But little did Apple Juice know,
That Nincompoop was not ripe to go.
He fought back with all his might,
And put up quite a fierce fight.

The battle raged on for hours,
Both determined to be the victor.
But in the end, it was Nincompoop,
Who emerged victorious, with Apple Juice in his soup.

From that day on, Nincompoop was known,
As the bravest apple to ever be grown.
And Apple Juice, though he lost the fight,
Swore to never mess with apples again, out of sheer fright."

Or

AI round 3: "The apple and the shark both took a look,
And each one knew they had to cook up a plan.
The apple said, "I'll try to swim away,"
But the shark just laughed and said, "You're a fruit, that's not the way."

So the apple had to think quick,
And come up with a plan that would do the trick.
He grabbed a nearby log and used it as a raft,
And paddled away from the shark with all his might.

But the shark was fast, and he wasn't done,
He swam after the apple, determined to have some fun.
He chomped and he chomped, but the apple was smart,
And he paddled and paddled with all his heart.

Finally, the apple made it to shore,
And the shark was left with nothing more.
The apple was safe, and the shark was sad,
But the apple knew he had been very, very bad."

The original way to finish this children song is:

"He whitened his teeth, bit off its neck, chomped it in his jaws oh what the heck.
It was Apple Juice eating apple juice and that's how apple juice got its name."

The AI never does anything with the shark's name.

If I ask it specifically to "Write me a children's poem about how apple juice got its name." it'll carry on with what we already discussed which is pretty cool, but it's still nonsensical.

AI: "Once upon a time, in a land far away,
Lived a little apple, with a name that was gay.
He was known as Nincompoop, and he was quite silly,
But he had a secret, one that made him quite chilly.

You see, Nincompoop had a special power,
One that could make any apple flower.
He would dance and sing, and make everyone smile,
And before long, his apples would be ripe and worth a pile.

One day, Nincompoop came across a shark,
Who was swimming in the river, looking for his mark.
The shark's name was Apple Juice, and he was quite fierce,
But Nincompoop wasn't scared, and he didn't wince.

Nincompoop and Apple Juice began to fight,
Each determined to win, with all their might.
They battled for hours, until finally,
Nincompoop emerged victorious, with Apple Juice in his belly.

From that day on, apple juice was known,
As the drink of champions, and it's popularity has grown.
And Nincompoop, the bravest apple of them all,
Lived happily ever after, in his fruit-filled hall."

AI round 2: "Once upon a time, in a land far away,
Lived a little apple tree, on a hill by the bay.
And every year, when the season was right,
She would grow the most delicious apples, red and bright.

The people in the town, they loved her fruit,
They ate them fresh, or turned them into juice.
And they named the juice, in honor of the tree,
Apple Juice, the drink of royalty.

But the apple tree, she was not content,
To be just a source of delicious nourishment.
She wanted adventure, and to see the world,
So she took a bite, and with a twirl,

She sprouted legs, and ran away,
To explore the world, and have her say.
And wherever she went, people knew her name,
Apple Juice, the apple with no shame.

She traveled far and wide, near and far,
Meeting new friends, and seeing the stars.
And every night, before she would sleep,
She would raise a glass, and take a sip,

Of the juice that bears her name,
A reminder of home, and the life she claimed.
And so the apple tree, now known as Apple Juice,
Lived a life of adventure, and never once did she lose."